Copywriters Forum

hello everyone, I'm Shagun and I've just started learning copywriting

so I hope to learn from all of you and help others as much as I can

thank you very much for looking in to my copy
and for your answer
I wrote this copy just for my practice. I've been only writing emails copy for practice and building my skill.So, it would be very helpful if you could give me some reviews and feedback.

Hey everyone! I'm Shagun and I've started copywriting recently by watching a youtube video

I'm here looking for feedback ansd review on my copies

any recommendations would be appreciated