FACT: When it comes to your copy the only one who can give you true feedback is your target audience.
If they positively respond to your copy… then it’s good. If they don’t… then it’s not.
So any expert feedback you get here (or even just the random opinions) should be taken with a grain of salt, because the only way to know for sure if it’s good, is to test it and let the market decide.
That said, there are certain fundamentals that apply to all good copy. And experienced writers can often spot mistakes that less experienced writers don’t notice.
Also, when it comes to our own copy we’re often too close to it, to objectively evaluate it. So it can help to have another set of experienced eyes take a look at it, before we present it to the world.
So keep all that in mind. And if you have some copy you’d like reviewed by the members of this forum, then go back one click, create a new topic, and post it.